Dangers of 5G network – ENC 1101

Dangers of 5G network – ENC 1101

December 12, 2020 |

Dangers of 5G network – ENC 1101   You are editing file attached, name MY WORK. Pleas follow the rubric, to make sure it meets the first column of 20 point creteria. Got a 89.17% because of sentence structure. Can you update please so that I can get an A and I can rate 5 stars. Professor’s Feedback DROPBOX FEEDBACK This is an excellent argument, and it is indeed persuasive. Well done. Both body points are wonderfully explored with the first having a bit deeper analysis than the second. Otherwise, there is a strange paragraph sitting between the second body point and the conclusion. Since the essay is supposed to be four (4) paragraphs and It does not add any value to the argument, go ahead and delete. Then, your organization score will improve. Easy “A.” Look over the scored rubric and ask me any questions. You are welcome to…    read more 

Dangers of 5G network – ENC 1101

December 12, 2020 |

Dangers of 5G network – ENC 1101   I completed my first draft essay and had it revised by one of my tutor at my school. Need assistance with making the edits and revision and adding additional information to clarify/strengthen my points on why I am against 5G network. I have attached the revision and the esssay is below. Please assist with making corrections and edits. Should be real quick. 20190628154839danger_of_5g_network    

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